Many people are working at home rather than in the workplace. Some people believe this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, but others suggest it will cause stress in the home. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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While it is sometimes believed that working from
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affords and their
families some
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families, some
benefits, others,
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, are of the opinion that it would be stressful
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for
the
home
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. In my opinion, I consider that working from
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presents important benefits that would impact positively on the
quality
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of
life
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of workers and their families. On the one hand, some people believe that working from
home
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brings important benefits that would impact positively on the
quality
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of
life
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of workers and their families and I agree.
In other words
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, working from
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offers workers more time for themselves and their families and
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, are able to apply themselves to family activities
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as school runs and family playtime.
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, having more time would enable workers pursue other interests and
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, are able to get extra jobs that would present more income for the family.
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, being able to work in a more relaxed
mood relieves
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mood, relieves
workers of both physical and mental stress, and
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, enhances the
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of
life
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they live.
On the other hand
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, it is often thought that working from
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would be stressful
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for
the
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.
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, the
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office does not have a definite space and so encroaches into the family space.
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,
this
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would lead to work interruptions by family members, and
therefore
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, causes distraction to the worker. Another outcome is that it could lead to conflict in the
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that would impact in a negative sense on members of the family. In conclusion, while there are varying views regarding working from
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, I believe that it brings important benefits whose outcome is, better
quality
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of
life
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for workers and their families.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Telecommuting
  • Flexi-time
  • Remote work
  • Work-life integration
  • Virtual collaboration
  • Self-discipline
  • Workspace
  • Burnout
  • Ergonomics
  • Time management
  • Distractions
  • Productivity
  • Commuting
  • Connectivity issues
  • Team dynamics
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