Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter • suggest someone you think should receive the award • describe what the person does to help the community • suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Dear Sir., It is
undeninable
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that with the massive good
caraters
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characters

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of people of our community It is going to be a difficult task for you to decide
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wich
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fellow will be the winner. Knowing that
,
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I am coming to you through
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in
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behalf of my dear friend
Halan
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Helen

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, that have
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spreadly
well known
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way, I would like to
remmember
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hero that
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between us.
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, I can bring back the date of 21st
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of 2017 when we
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biggest
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ever in our community, Halan and his friends from the
firefiters
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station worked for 30 hours without rest
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save
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more than 137 lives and 21 pets. Many of them got sick because their immunity was
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during the cold weather and hard work. My friend was the leader of that operation, and he worked more than
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that day, he worked
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37 hours, and just stopped when he had
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that everyone was safe. Because
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amazing fact I suggest
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the town and a letter to thank him for that day, I
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that all people that passed for that would want to sign
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letter. Please consider my plea, I
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do think that my friend Halan
disearve
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recive
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this
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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