Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter • suggest someone you think should receive the award • describe what the person does to help the community • suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Dear Sir., It is
undeninable
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that with the massive good
caraters
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characters
of people of our community It is going to be a difficult task for you to decide
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which
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wich
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fellow will be the winner. Knowing that
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I am coming to you through
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letter
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behalf of my dear friend
Halan
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Helen
, that have
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spreadly
well known
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deeds.
This
way, I would like to
remmember
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remember
the
comunity
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community
this
hero that
live
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between us.
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, I can bring back the date of 21st
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of 2017 when we
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biggest
fload
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flood
load
ever in our community, Halan and his friends from the
firefiters
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firefighters
station worked for 30 hours without rest
for
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save
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more than 137 lives and 21 pets. Many of them got sick because their immunity was
decrising
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decreasing
during the cold weather and hard work. My friend was the leader of that operation, and he worked more than
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that day, he worked
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incredible
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37 hours, and just stopped when he had
shure
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sure
that everyone was safe. Because
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amazing fact I suggest
give
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for him a key
of
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the town and a letter to thank him for that day, I
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believe
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belive
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that all people that passed for that would want to sign
this
letter. Please consider my plea, I
realy
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really
do think that my friend Halan
disearve
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deserve
to
recive
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receive
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. Thank you for the attention!!
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