The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

In recent years, there have been a number of problems that people in big cities have to cope with every day. My essay will discuss two major problems which are

pollution

and

information

overload, and personally I think those people should be encouraged to move to regional areas. Increased levels of

pollution

have been a great reason for concern among residents of big cities. Owing to a high volume of everyday traffic, massive quantities of pollutants

such

as CO2 are constantly released into the atmosphere, causing the degradation of air quality.

This

is closely associated with various types of respiratory diseases or even lung cancer.

Also

, people in big cities are being bombarded with too much

information

from the media, including TV, social networking sites and advertisements while

the large

Suggestion

the largest

larger

largest

proportion of

information

is fake news or exaggerated commercials.

This

can cause confusion or, in some cases, social anarchy. In my opinion, the Government should do what they can to encourage city dwellers to move to regional areas.

First

, it will reduce the number of vehicles in cities, which will definitely improve the situation where air

pollution

caused by traffic disturbs the lives of city residents.

Furthermore

, fewer people living in big cities will relieve the pressure on these cities’ housing supply systems when many people are living reluctantly in small, suffocating spaces. I think

this

extremely important point

Suggestion

an extremely important point

to consider because living spaces are linked to people’s mental health and how they perform at work. In conclusion, severe air

pollution

and

information

bombardment are among the most serious problems facing city dwellers nowadays, and I feel that

relevant authorities

Suggestion

the relevant authorities

should encourage people to relocate to other areas to live.

Submitted by 15es37 on Sat May 18 2019

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general