Even though globalization affects the world’s economy in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. Discuss.

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Globalization is a process of advancement and increase in interaction between the worlds’ countries and people. It

involes

connect closely and often incriminatingly

involves

invokes

in locomotion, communication, knowledge and skills.

Globalazation

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Globalization

Globalisation

is gaining

speen

to cover or extend over an area or time period

span

over the entire

world

. It

has attract

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has attracted

enough

world

attention needed from international organization in promoting and encouraging human right and freedom

Accept space

opportunities, economic, social and

culture

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cultural

rights.

However

, there are some countries that are missing out the opportunities that are offered and its taken as a big problem

Suggestion

for

their country. They are the poorer countries that are not connected to the people globally and their people are unskilled due to the lack of knowledge and equipments. They are

also

unable to trade with the other countries which are richer and larger as they are unable to meet the demand propose of them. They

also

will not have the opportunities and the challenges that are

require

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required

. Globalization

has

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has also encouraged

also

encourage crimes like the illegal drug trafficking around the

world

through the air, sea and land.

This

has involved human smuggling and stuffing it in anything they come across.

This

has affected a lot of problems

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the country and the families of the drug addicts.

This

will

also

lead to other crimes like robbery and violence in the country. Another negative side of globalization is the dumping of the dangerous waste

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into

the river, sea or the ocean.

This

will

effect

have an effect upon

affect

the

aquactic

relating to or consisting of or being in water

aquatic

creature,

contaninate

make impure

contaminate

contaminated

the water and cause harm to the people too. To conclude, globalization has contributed a lot to the

world

’s

econnmics

of or relating to an economy, the system of production and management of material wealth

economic

economies

but the international organization should

also

not forget

the poorer

Suggestion

the poorest

countries and the countries should

also

tackle

carry out

take

its other negative sides that affect the

world

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Even though globalization affects the world’s economy in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. Discuss.

Fully explain your ideas

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Describe a writer you would like to meet. You should say: who the writer is what you know about this writer already what you would like to find out about him/her and explain why you would like to meet this writer.

At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?