Even though globalization affects the world’s economy in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. Discuss.

Globalization is a process of advancement and increase in interaction between the worlds’ countries and people. It
involes
connect closely and often incriminatingly
involves
invokes
in locomotion, communication, knowledge and skills.
Globalazation
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Globalization
Globalisation
is gaining
speen
to cover or extend over an area or time period
span
over the entire
world
. It
has attract
Suggestion
has attracted
enough
world
attention needed from international organization in promoting and encouraging human right and freedom
,
Accept space
,
opportunities, economic, social and
culture
Suggestion
cultural
rights.
However
, there are some countries that are missing out the opportunities that are offered and its taken as a big problem
to
Suggestion
for
in
their country. They are the poorer countries that are not connected to the people globally and their people are unskilled due to the lack of knowledge and equipments. They are
also
unable to trade with the other countries which are richer and larger as they are unable to meet the demand propose of them. They
also
will not have the opportunities and the challenges that are
require
Suggestion
required
. Globalization
has
Suggestion
has also encouraged
also
encourage crimes like the illegal drug trafficking around the
world
through the air, sea and land.
This
has involved human smuggling and stuffing it in anything they come across.
This
has affected a lot of problems
to
Suggestion
in
the country and the families of the drug addicts.
This
will
also
lead to other crimes like robbery and violence in the country. Another negative side of globalization is the dumping of the dangerous waste
to
Suggestion
into
the river, sea or the ocean.
This
will
effect
have an effect upon
affect
the
aquactic
relating to or consisting of or being in water
aquatic
creature,
contaninate
make impure
contaminate
contaminated
the water and cause harm to the people too. To conclude, globalization has contributed a lot to the
world
’s
econnmics
of or relating to an economy, the system of production and management of material wealth
economic
economies
but the international organization should
also
not forget
the poorer
Suggestion
the poorest
countries and the countries should
also
tackle
carry out
take
its other negative sides that affect the
world
.
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