Some film companies spend millions of dollar on the production of a single movie. Is it necessary to spend a lot of money to make a good movie ? What factors contribute to the success of a movie ? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Film industry
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The film industry
has vastly changed in
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last couple
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the last couple
of years. With high-budget films like "Avengers", it seems that a good movie can be made only by investing millions of dollars. Even though all of these are great films in their own right, only high-budget films are great, is certainly a myth. Making high-budget films are the only way to succeed in the industry is a new mindset. But if we look past the
last
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couple of years, the same industry has produced some low-budget
master pieces
the most outstanding work of a creative artist or craftsman
masterpieces
,
for example
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, "12 angry men".
This
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is one of my
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
movies of all times and the entire
film
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is shot in one room, with 12 people in it, making it a low-budget
film
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. That being said, the
film
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was still a success and has been used as a great example to teach some of the management and co-operation principles to
management
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manage
students in universities. It is remembered as one of the best learning experience by many.
This
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indicates clearly that, for a
film
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to be successful, money or investment is not the only thing required. In my opinion,
audience
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the audience
is looking for other factors like great storyline, good set of characters and actors.
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more subtle things like direction, editing and cinematography matters a lot as well. All of these factors
together makes
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together make
a great piece of art. For me personally,
plot
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the plot
of the movie
is
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has been
always the major driving factor.
Plot
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The plot
works as a main protagonist and I get
immideatly
without delay or hesitation; with no time intervening
immediately
engaged in it. In conclusion, though high-
budeget
a sum of money allocated for a particular purpose
budget
films have great visuals and audience seems to love them, money is certainly not the only factor that makes movies successful.
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