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Why is solar energy getting so popular. What are the advantage and disadvantage of solar energy

#energy #advantage
Everyone is concerned with the issue of global warming and its consequences because of that scientist and other concerned cadres are working day and night with the aim of discovering the best solution to reduce or
total
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totally
 stop global warming.
This
 has led to the introduction of solar
energy
 which is believed to be more friendly to the ecosystem.
Additionally
, solar
power
 has been found to be cheaper than other forms of
energy but
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energy, but
 it has one major drawback it is too reliant to sunlight. The main merits of using
power
 from the sun, is its affordability because it does not involve monthly payments. Unlike electricity or other fossil fuels, it is not paid per consumption, installation is the only thing which needs to be paid, once installed all the other use is free of charge.To date
energy
 from the solar has proved to be cheap because it
has no
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has, no
meter
a vaguely specified concern
matter
 which measure the rate of use so as to pay by the end of
certain period
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a certain period
the certain period
certain periods
. A case in point
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is
the
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The
 solar panels installed in the streets of Zimbabwe to
power
 the street lights, these were installed almost 10years ago up to date they are still being used but no one is making any form of payment. Therefor, we can clearly conclude that sunlight is a cheap source of
energy
. One major drawback of using solar
energy
 is, it is highly dependent to the sun. If it is cloudy, it is very difficult to get adequate
energy
as a result
, in areas which are always cold and cloudy it is difficult to rely on
this
 form of
energy
. To add more, most countries have seasons and some seasons are not that sunny.
For instance
, in Zimbabwe there are two seasons, winter and summer. The winter is very cold and cloudy
as a
result it
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result, it
 is impossible to rely on the use solar
power
. In conclusion, the sun provides us with low priced
energy
 which does not cause air pollution,
although
 it is difficult to depend on it when there is no sunlight.
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