As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work job satisfaction is an important elements of individual well being. Factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

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A happy and contented

job

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is the target of most

peoples

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people

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, Human resources are most versatile

asset

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assets

of any industry

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factors contributing to their contentment level with current employment and

likelihood

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the likelihood

of a contented

job

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are discussed in

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the ensuing paragraphs

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the most important factor

behind a satisfied employee is a

job

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offering security. Security at workplace not only relates to how permanent a

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is, but is

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associated with personal security.

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, employees generally feel dissatisfied while working in organisation which do not promise long-lasting

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more the opportunities of growth more contented are the workers.

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this

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, monetary benefits given to the Employees

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contribute to enhance satisfaction level.

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, a number of factors

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govern

that how contented a worker feels on a

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, satisfaction is a subjective matter and

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some time ensuring happiness among employees about their service place becomes an unrealistic task for employers.

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with ever increasing human desire it is impossible that workers remain amazed with

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the same job

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over

longer duration

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a longer duration

of time. A survey conducted by The Times states that while doing

same type

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the same type

job

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the workers stars becoming dissatisfied with their current service and

they

of them or themselves

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desire to leave their jobs if are not financially bound.

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, a ideally happy

job

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is an unrealistic scenario for both

employee

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employees

and employers

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To conclude,

job

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security

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promotion rate and financial benefits leading to

satisfactory work culture

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a satisfactory work culture

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, even with these

factors it

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factors, it

is uncertain to predict and ensure that employees will remain satisfied over

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long runs

the long run

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being

the part of their present company

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work job satisfaction is an important elements of individual well being. Factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

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