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In some countries, government are encouraging industries and business to move to regional areas outside the big cities. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages.

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Government in certain countries
persuade
Suggestion
persuades
 firms and commercial companies to establish more in the suburbs. For some reasons, I would argue that the benefits of
this
 are more than the drawbacks. Few demerits are associated with movements from the metropolis to hinterlands;
firstly
,
this
 will increase the distance staff have to travel to and from work. Because of
this
, some seasoned workers might quit the job for any other job in the
city
 where they reside.
This
results
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result
to
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in
 loss of human capital.
For example
, when a drug company in Enugu
city
 moved to a village, it lost most of her experienced workers and that almost affected
then
objective case of they
them
 adversely.
However
,
this
 may be considered insignificant.
On the other hand
, there
are
Suggestion
is
 a good number of positives when businesses operate away from the
city
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
. One of them is that development will extend to these outskirt regions, and
this
 means increased commercial activities and employment among the youths.
Secondly
, it will curtail urbanization and its negative effects,
such
 as overcrowding in the
city
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
, disease epidemics and
polutins
, both air and noise
polutions
undesirable state of the natural environment being contaminated with harmful substances as a consequence of human activities
pollution
.
For example
, the movement of Nigerian Brewery from Enugu town to villages around it greatly reduced communicable disease and lung cancers associated with air pollution by carbons. To conclude,
although
 there are disadvantage of shifting
bussinesses
a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
businesses
business
 to regional places around the main
city
, it is more advantageous as it will provide
job
Suggestion
jobs
 for those in the suburb and
decongest
 the
city
.
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