You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager, In your letter explain why you want to work in the company's head office for six months say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it.

Dear Mark, I am writing to you with regards to my secondment in head
office
. As you know the secondment lasts for six months, I would really appreciate
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it arranged. I would like to let you know that I am n extrovert person, I
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enjoy meeting new people and learning from their experiences. Working at
head
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the head

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office
in New
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office
will bring me
this
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communications and relations better. I would
also
like to see how
the
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things are performed at head
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and if they excel us in terms of work. While I am outstation, Many would help you carry out my existing tasks and duties, she has always assisted me, I
beleive
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it will be a good
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for her to showcase her
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I am available on my email and phone if you need anything,
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would do
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there. As you know it is very important to me, please write me a
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letter and
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in New York
office
, so
this
arrangement could be made possible. Kind Regards, Mehwish.
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