You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager, In your letter explain why you want to work in the company's head office for six months say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it.

#work #company #six #months #head #office #country #manager

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

Dear Mark, I am writing to you with regards to my secondment in head

office

Use synonyms

. As you know the secondment lasts for six months, I would really appreciate

Correct pronoun usage

it if

show examples

you help me

getting

Change the form of the verb

get

show examples

it arranged. I would like to let you know that I am n extrovert person, I

Correct your spelling

really

show examples

relly

Correct your spelling

really

show examples

enjoy meeting new people and learning from their experiences. Working at

head

Add an article

the head

show examples

office

Use synonyms

in New

york

Change the capitalization

York

show examples

office

Use synonyms

will bring me

this

Linking Words

opportunity to understand interacial and

multicultual

Correct your spelling

multicultural

communications and relations better. I would

also

Linking Words

like to see how

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

things are performed at head

offcie

Correct your spelling

office

and if they excel us in terms of work. While I am outstation, Many would help you carry out my existing tasks and duties, she has always assisted me, I

beleive

Correct your spelling

believe

it will be a good

oppotyunity

Correct your spelling

opportunity

for her to showcase her

skillset

Correct your spelling

skill set

show examples

Meanwhile

Add a comma

,Meanwhile

show examples

I am available on my email and phone if you need anything,

Change the capitalization

show examples

would do

from

Correct pronoun usage

it from

show examples

there. As you know it is very important to me, please write me a

recomendation

Correct your spelling

recommendation

letter and

soeak

Correct your spelling

speak

t the partner

incharge

Correct your spelling

in charge

in New York

office

Use synonyms

, so

this

Linking Words

arrangement could be made possible. Kind Regards, Mehwish.

Submitted by mehwish.j on Fri May 24 2019

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

2
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

191 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

Topic Vocabulary:

professional advancement
cross-cultural collaboration
headquarters/ head office
global perspective
remote work
temporary assignment
team dynamics
networking opportunities
cultural immersion
succession planning
collaborative tools
time zone coordination
corporate hierarchy
relocation logistics
work-life balance
multinational environment

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

6.5
band
It is important to use land for human needs such as farming, housing and industry than to save it for endangered animals. Give reasons for you answer and include any relevant examples from you own knowledge or experience.
In this contemporary world, it is argued that it is vital to utilize land for human needs than for endangered animals. I completely agree with this idea as more and more people are being born and animals are already on unusable land. In this essay, I will try to draw some conclusions.
<4
band
chart and graph about hte sale volume by different company and the pirce share
The chart illustrates the percetages of Coca-Cola sales volume across different regions in 2000. While the graph describes the variation of the price of its share between 1996-2001. Overall, North America was the highest among other regions in the sale volume and accounted for more than the quarter of the sale. In addition, there was a significant increase in the price of the share in the middle of the indicated period.
7.5
band
You need a website for your business, and you would like to ask your friend to build it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter •Include a brief description of your business •Explain what you would like to have on the website •Provide some ideas on the use of images on the website.
I hope you and your family are doing splendidly. I am doing great too. It has been a long time since we met each other. As you know I started my business last month, therefore, I am writing this letter for your helping hand in making the best website for my business.
5
band
There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that someone's achievements are related to their abilities accomplishing their academic subjects. Meanwhile, those who do not have a success story in academic usually ignored by society although she has already achieved her dream in different field. This contention leads to some doubts and the ruler should consider to remove non-academic subjects. Personally, I disagree with this opinion since children need to explore more about their preferences. A further explanation will be presented below.
<4
band
Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using cars?
It is true nowadays vehicles belonging has greatly increased over the past 3 decades and caused a huge traffic congestion issue. Governments should take action to reduce vehicle belonging, such as making rule for vehicles belonging and develops more proper public transportation.

It is important to use land for human needs such as farming, housing and industry than to save it for endangered animals. Give reasons for you answer and include any relevant examples from you own knowledge or experience.

chart and graph about hte sale volume by different company and the pirce share

You need a website for your business, and you would like to ask your friend to build it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter •Include a brief description of your business •Explain what you would like to have on the website •Provide some ideas on the use of images on the website.

Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using cars?