Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.

The meal is the most valuable things in our life
for
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from
the
begining
the event consisting of the start of something
beginning
of human exist.
Devoloping
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Developing
of human civilization, mankind
find
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finds
foods easier and fast.
However
, some people think that it is not
healty
having or indicating good health in body or mind; free from infirmity or disease
healthy
health
and decrease life quality, as growing
technology
and
population
.
In contrast
, the new
technic
a practical method or art applied to some particular task
technique
technics
techniques
of cooking helps to people among many factors
such
as; time, enough
food
sources and make
new vision
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the new vision
of best agriculture and animal farming The most common problem is
population
. Some scientist think that the world consume too much
food
as before. In
additionally
, the result of high
population
has an effect on
incresea
become bigger or greater in amount
increase
increases
popularity of junk foods. There are not
healty
having or indicating good health in body or mind; free from infirmity or disease
healthy
health
due to
cooking method
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the cooking method
.
For instance
, in
populer
regarded with great favor, approval, or affection especially by the general public
popular
hamburger restaurants provide
food
with a same oil like cooking fries.
on
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On
the other hand
,
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,
the restaurant expense
dramaticly rise
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dramatically rises
dramatically rise
according to home made foods.
However
, according to
changed world
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the changed world food system
food
system is obligatory to choosing junk
food
. The
second
important problem is the fast growth
food agliculture
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food, agriculture
food agriculture
policy which using
cheaping
the commercial enterprise of moving goods and materials
shipping
chopping
shaping
method. So, farmers use chemical for
much
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many
product or huge volumed
vegatables
edible seeds or roots or stems or leaves or bulbs or tubers or nonsweet fruits of any of numerous herbaceous plant
vegetables
.
In contrast
, all
chemical
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chemicals
manufactured according to human toxicology levels.
Thus
, the developed
technology
increase find out exact needs on the foods.
Besides
, the tech not only help to improve quality of farming, but
also
, it is
influence
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the influence
on
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of
the artificial meat farming or quality of animal meat, more cheaper than before. Both of these problems, mankind must find new
food
resources and improve
food
technology
.
the
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The
groving
(biology) the process of an individual organism growing organically; a purely biological unfolding of events involved in an organism changing gradually from a simple to a more complex level
growing
tech has
effect
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the effect
on
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to
provide more
food
and easy prepared.
population
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Population
can consume
food
losing any time. IN SHORT, the healthy
junkfood
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junk food
facilite
a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry
facilities
facilitate
facility
our life,
for instance
, especially time and health. The
technology
improve more
Suggestion
improves, more
improves more
has improved more
is improving more
produce more
Accept comma addition
produce, more
effective and rich
food
for our civilization.
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