Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.
The meal is the most valuable things in our life
for
the Suggestion
from
begining
of human exist. the event consisting of the start of something
beginning
Devoloping
of human civilization, mankind Suggestion
Developing
find
foods easier and fast. Suggestion
finds
However
, some people think that it is not healty
and decrease life quality, as growing having or indicating good health in body or mind; free from infirmity or disease
healthy
health
technology
and population
. In contrast
, the new technic
of cooking helps to people among many factors a practical method or art applied to some particular task
technique
technics
techniques
such
as; time, enough food
sources and make new vision
of best agriculture and animal farming
The most common problem is Suggestion
the new vision
population
. Some scientist think that the world consume too much food
as before. In additionally
, the result of high population
has an effect on incresea
popularity of junk foods. There are not become bigger or greater in amount
increase
increases
healty
due to having or indicating good health in body or mind; free from infirmity or disease
healthy
health
cooking method
. Suggestion
the cooking method
For instance
, in populer
hamburger restaurants provide regarded with great favor, approval, or affection especially by the general public
popular
food
with a same oil like cooking fries. on
the other handSuggestion
On
,
the restaurant expense Accept space
,
dramaticly rise
according to home made foods. Suggestion
dramatically rises
dramatically rise
However
, according to changed world
Suggestion
the changed world food system
food
system is obligatory to choosing junk food
.
The second
important problem is the fast growth food agliculture
policy which using Accept comma addition
food, agriculture
food agriculture
cheaping
method. So, farmers use chemical for the commercial enterprise of moving goods and materials
shipping
chopping
shaping
much
product or huge volumed Suggestion
many
vegatables
. edible seeds or roots or stems or leaves or bulbs or tubers or nonsweet fruits of any of numerous herbaceous plant
vegetables
In contrast
, all chemical
manufactured according to human toxicology levels. Suggestion
chemicals
Thus
, the developed technology
increase find out exact needs on the foods. Besides
, the tech not only help to improve quality of farming, but also
, it is influence
Suggestion
the influence
on
the artificial meat farming or quality of animal meat, more cheaper than before.
Both of these problems, mankind must find new Suggestion
of
food
resources and improve food
technology
. the
Suggestion
The
groving
tech has (biology) the process of an individual organism growing organically; a purely biological unfolding of events involved in an organism changing gradually from a simple to a more complex level
growing
effect
Suggestion
the effect
on
provide more Suggestion
to
food
and easy prepared. population
can consume Suggestion
Population
food
losing any time.
IN SHORT, the healthy junkfood
Suggestion
junk food
facilite
our life, a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry
facilities
facilitate
facility
for instance
, especially time and health. The technology
improve more
Suggestion
improves, more
improves more
has improved more
is improving more
produce more
effective and rich Accept comma addition
produce, more
food
for our civilization.
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