The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.

The bar chart illustrates information about the proportion of unemployed

women

in four different countries of the UK in 2013 and 2014. First of all.The highest percentage of jobless

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was in England. In 2013, England became the first with almost 7% of unemployed

women

followed by, Scotland, which was slightly ahead

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Ireland. Wales has the largest number of employed

women

in 2013, with 5.4 % of undefined

women

. In 2014, the percentage of

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women

in Scotland has risen steadily.

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decreased gradually in both

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Wales and England. As the same as in 2013, the least proportions of undefined

women

were in Northern Ireland with nearly 4%. In conclusion ,

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the chart Northern Ireland had the fewest proportion of unemployed

women

in both years.Whilst the rate has dropped in 2014 in

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three of the UK countries. The rate in Scotland has

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.