Some people get into debt by buying things they don’t need and can’t afford. What are the reasons for this behaviour? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words

Are we buying more stuff than we need? Recent research indicates that a large number of people who run into debt is because they have bought things that they cannot afford with its wages. The endless desire of buying unnecessary things is caused for many reasons and some solutions are
mentionated
make reference to
mentioned
below.
To begin
with, the trend nowadays is towards buying things on the internet even if people do not need or use them.
In addition
, thanks to technology and online stores hardly a week goes by without receiving a sales email of some important brand with incredible discounts that in physical stores are not given.
As a result
, people
clic
a short light metallic sound
click
clicks
on the advertisement and end up buying something that they did not need it. But, where does
this
desire of buying more material things comes from? Many experts say that we are
living
the act of departing
leaving
faster than ever before.Paradoxically is we
achive
to gain with effort
achieve
achieved
more
then
, we want more
consequently
, we buy more
hence
, we need to work more. It is never ending
,
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,
we are constantly having a vicious life. The more people
have the
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have, the
more they lost focus
.
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.
To begin
to tackle
this
situation, individuals need to start taking some meditation courses
ir
order to be more aware of the situations lest take rush decisions when people see advertisements
also
, people should ask
this
question before buy something
,
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,
do
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
really need
this
? In
this
way people can start to be more conscious about the money they spend.
For instance
, in countries like
India where
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India, where
meditation is taught in schools
since
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from
early childhood are the ones where people only purchase stuffs with a real purpose of use. To sum up, excess material
possesions
the act of having and controlling property
possessions
do not enrich our lives. No marketer is pulling out our credit card at a register or
clicling
a short light metallic sound
clicking
to ship.In
fact buying
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fact, buying
things we do not need
keep
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to keep
away people from being who they really are, meditation
is highly need
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has highly needed
it so as to open our
concious
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consciousness
conscious
and spent money on what they need.
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