The best way to reduce the number of traffic accidents is to raise the age limit for younger drivers and to lower the age limit for aged drivers. Do you agree

Traffic accidents are on the rise these days. Most of the accidents caused injuries or either worse death. Research

have found

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has found

that most of the accidents are caused by inexperienced drivers,

for example

young drivers. Young drivers tend to be more daring and are unable to avoid a

crush

a loud resonant repeating noise

crash

when they face one. They tend to be more daring after drinking alcohol at night and

this

causes them to lose control of the car. Drunk driving will not only risk a person’s own

life but

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life, but

may

also

cause an

innivent

not even or uniform as e.g. in shape or texture

uneven

innocent

infant

life to be lost. The government should encourage the driving school to conduct driving lessons

foryung

drivers for a

longer

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long

period.

This

will give them a clear picture about how accidents happen and teach them about the safety of others on the road. Drivers that have been in an accident after drunk driving should be

ban

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banned

from driving for at least two years and be given driving lessons again.

However

, for the aged drivers, the government should not only lowered the age

limit but

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limit, but

also

check the capability of the aged

drivers

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drivers, for

for instance

eyesight, hearing and other related health conditions to ensure safe driving. It does not mean that an aged person

are not fit

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is not fitting

don't fit

to drive and has a problem with the

heart but

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heart, but

a young or a middle aged person could

also

have heart failure these days.___ To conclude, I feel that to raise the

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age limit

of young drivers

arenot

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are not

the

best solution but to

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best solution, but

best solution but

give them more driving lessons about the problems they may encounter on the road and to ban them from driving if they have caused an accident due to carelessness. As for the age drivers, as long as they are capable on the road before a certain age and there are no health issues there shouldn’t be a problem.