Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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At some point, it is no

brainer

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that people can enjoy more happiness at a young age rather than when they become older. The complete

oppsite

being directly across from each other; facing

opposite

view

also

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has good points to stand, even with growing

responsibilites

the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force

responsibilities

that adults should bare. I think the

oppsite

being directly across from each other; facing

opposite

upshot

view couldn’t be more true. The best evidence to the youth side’s argument is children’s access to freedom. Thinking outside of

box

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the box

is a motto that most adults have to learn and practice, yet young generations have that by nature. Without

restricked

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responsiblities

the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force

responsibilities

, and rules one has learned during the

adultholds

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adult holds

, those teenagers simply can enjoy more in life.

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, a mother looks at the window in her house thinking, “It’s time to clean the window.”, a 16 years girl would look at it and thinking, “What a wonderful day today!”. That’s

clear

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clearly

the girl knows how to be happy. For adults, they have learned how to avoid on the things that had made them unhappy in the past to ever happen again.

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, by cutting out the misfortunes, those

growups

any number of entities (members) considered as a unit

groups

can live in a happier life than they couldn’t have lived

otherwise

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. I’ve seen in TV many times that a child had broken his bones by being audacious when playing sports.

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, I don’t see that happened to an adult who had broken his bones by playing sports

carlessly

without care or concern

carelessly

, or didn’t wear pads.

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, I do believe adults can actually enjoy freedom in a better way compare to teenagers. In conclusion, in comparing the two different age groups, the

first

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group enjoys more happiness by having more freedom, while the

opposit

being directly across from each other; facing

opposite

group enjoys more by eliminating the misfortunes they have learned. I believe those who master the

prcess

a particular course of action intended to achieve a result

process

processes

of elimination can harvest the most

thrils

the swift release of a store of affective force

thrills

trials

trails

and smiles in life.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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296 words

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