Should the same laws which prohibit the sale and consumption of heroin be applied to tobacco? Discuss.

Tobocco
Suggestion
Tobacco
consumption
in any means is injurious to health. I totally agree with the statement, given that the Legal action to be taken on who sells or who consumes Tobacco, similar to Heroine which is already in force.
Firstly
, the intake of Tobacco in any form, leads to cancer and lung diseases, which has already been proved and a lot of Medical facts too confirms the same. Tobacco is available in various forms in the market, Some of the examples were Cigarettes, Kaini, Gutkha, Thambaku and so on.
For Instance
, chewing
gutkha
or
thambaku
leads to Mouth Cancer and inhaling Cigarette smoke is not only injurious to the smoker but
also
to the people surrounding him. As we all know Health is our primary wealth, but
this
intakers
might have forgotten
this
fact.
Secondly
, in case of below middle class families, among Men and women, Men were fond of Tobacco. Leaving all the family responsibilities aside, they
gets
Suggestion
get
addicted to
this
Tobacco and
destory
do away with, cause the destruction or undoing of
destroy
their Financial momentum. I
know since
Accept comma addition
know, since
ages Governments have been running promotions, educational camps to lesser its
consumption
. To go to
next level
Suggestion
the next level
, Lawmakers should come forward and build system to take stringent action on the production and Sale of Tobacco, which
inturn
Suggestion
in turn
reduces the
consumption
. To Summarize above discussion, I strongly feel Government bodies should implement the same
lasw
the collection of rules imposed by authority
laws
againt
in contact with
against
agent
selling,
consumption
alike Heroine. Running awareness camps, promoting its bad effects would help to less its
consumption
but cannot completely eradicate it.
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