In order to solve traffic problems, Government should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?

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It has been said that Governments have the responsibility to revive the public transportation system by taxing on private car drivers.
However
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,
this
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phenomenon has both benefits and
drabacks
the quality of being a hindrance
drawbacks
drawback
.
This
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essay will address both of the views with explanation
To begin
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with, one of the advantages of imposing
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tax
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taxes
to private car drivers is, it will not only help to accumulate Government revenue, but will
also
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discourage to purchase from private vehicles which will eventually reduce the traffic congestion from the roads, as cars hold
majority portion
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a majority portion
of the roads and highways.
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, Governments could use the money to rejuvenate the transportation system which will increase the uses of public transport by people.
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, imposing high taxes on cars has several drawbacks,
first
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and foremost, improving public transport system is a mega project, and the investment required to finish
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endeavour
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enormous, so
only
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the only tax
tax
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on cars would bring the questioned about the probability of the project.
Secondly
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, even
thought
(postpositive) however
though
tax
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on cars will help to collect some earnings, the
tax
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rate
use
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
is
to be
falt
a fabric made of compressed matted animal fibers
felt
fat
flat
for everyone. That means, there is a high chance to create social discrimination among people as poor people have to pay more taxes from their earnings than the
rich which will
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rich, which will
create another problem
.
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.
To conclude, it is
Government's duty
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the Government's duty
to improve and maintain the local transportation services by collecting revenue, but if it totally depends on high
tax
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earnings
form
a giver or sender
from
cars,
then
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this
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solution will bring some other problems.
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