Some people believe that to reduce the amount of time people spend commuting (travelling to work), parks and gardens close to city centres should be replaced by apartment buildings for commuters to live in. However, others disagree with this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Although
it is sometimes thought that parks and gardens ought to cut which
are closer to Accept comma addition
cut, which
city
centres, while other people believe that these recreational places provides relief from hussle
-Suggestion
Hussle
hassle
bussle
move or cause to move energetically or busily
bustle
city
life. In my opinion, rather than to focus on to reduce parks
, Suggestion
parking
its
better to introduce it is
it's
fastest transit system
to commute Suggestion
the fastest transit system
city
centre from distances.
On the one hand, some people think that, parks and gardens covers
Suggestion
cover
large area
, because of it, commuters have to travel more distance Suggestion
a large area
large areas
upto
5km as compare
to short running distance. Suggestion
compared
In other words
, the travelling time can be cut by wipe
out these places. Suggestion
wiping
Consequently
, new alternative ways introduce or even provide new housing opportunity. Hence
, time can be saved for the local people. For example
, in delhi
, there is a a city in north central India
Delhi
city
garden but
now, it urn into cursed for the people of Accept comma addition
garden, but
location
.
Suggestion
the location
On the other hand
, to break the continuity of concrete forest around of us, its
good to have some break-up space. These spaces provide opportunities to relax, discontinuation of monotonous environment and fresh air. Without these spaces, it is
it's
city
would lack the ability to provide open-air and open Suggestion
the city
spave
.
the unlimited expanse in which everything is located
space
Finally
, in my view, both situations are indispensable for a citizen. But, omitting garden spaces is not a solution who commute
from distances. So, its better to introduce Suggestion
commutes
alternative fastest medium
to commute Suggestion
the alternative fastest medium
city
like bullet train
, Suggestion
a bullet train
bullet trains
metrk
routes etc. By using an electric railway operating below the surface of the ground (usually in a city)
metro
metric
this
, traffic chaos will reduced at most extent and appreciate these spares.
In conclusion, despite people having different views, i
believe it would be better to introduce refers to the speaker or writer
I
alternatative
fastest medium because open spaces are beneficial and imperative for every one of a number of things from which only one can be chosen
alternative
cities
. To welcome huge mass in these places, these break-up space plays Suggestion
city
very important role
.Suggestion
a very important role
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