Many people say that the only way to guarantee getting a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work. How far do you agree or disagree with the above views?
Owing to the fact that there are jobs require a completed course of
university
education
.Some think that is
the only way to find a good job
.While,
There are other how believe that the Accept space
,
experience
is important as the graduation from university
.In my opinion, I believe that university
education
is nassery
for some jobs. absolutely essential
necessary
Furthermore
, other jobs require more experience
than university
courses.
On the one hand. There are some jobs cannot be done without education
.It is important to have a university
education
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these
those
For example
, being a doctors
is one of the jobs that Suggestion
doctor
university
education
is a major nassery
to have. People how a child's room for a baby
nursery
necessary
have not take
any medicine courses are not able to do Suggestion
have not taken
this
work.The experience
are not
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is not
this
case.It is a good thing to have but after finishing the medicine course .
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.
On the other hand
. There are other jobs considered the experience
as a very impotant
to do the work.As long as the workers have the of great significance or value
important
experience
their
is no need for any other qualifications.in or at that place
there
For instance
, jobs as wall painters can succsfuly
with success; in a successful manner
successfully
done
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do
with out
any especial course.The painters need to learn how to paint and in absence of
without
that is
somthing
it is can be done by the time to gain the an unspecified thing, agency, amount, etc.
something
experience
they need to work in this
job
.
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education
it is dose
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mean
t
have a good in the direction of
to
job
. Some people still can gain money without any education
as many
as the Suggestion
much
university
graduations.As long as they do their job
perfectly it is can be possible.Submitted by asd43214321asd on
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