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The tradition that family gets together to eat meals is disappearing. What are the reasons? What are the impacts?

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It is true that the traditional family
mealtime
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 is disappearing nowadays. There is the main reason
from
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for
 modern world issues have been affected by members' daily
life
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 routine.
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, impacts on nutrition, and the pattern of behaviour is changing. It is clear that modern
life
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 is driving members to work hard in order to pursue their career, and put pressure on getting a better income.
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, they forget the importance of family
mealtime
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 which is a chance to let the members get closer. The
second
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 reason is a
food
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 diversity outside attracts people with a cheap price
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that's
 easy to purchase when they are busy. People tend to grab
food
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 outside rather than try to arrange a time to spend with family on that account. The consequences for family
life
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 and
children
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child
children's
 nutrition are serious.
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, The family mealtimes
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provides
 members with home-made
food
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 as part of a healthier diet.
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, It can help to avoid a bad habit of eating junk
food
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 and fast
food
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 chain.
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, maintaining a work-
life
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 balance is important, which is helped by reminding take a break to set off a family time.
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, being on a regular family
mealtime
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 gains the connection between members and shorten the gap
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between
 generations. A close-knit family improves children’s pattern behaviour by listening to their sharing. In conclusion, in a busy
life
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 nowadays, each member has a responsibility to arrange the time for family
mealtime
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 in order to not only for a healthy diet but
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 for a stable family background.
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