The charts below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart highlights the
exports
revenues of one country during 2015 among 5 categories Change the noun form
export
then
it shows how the value
for each category changed in 2016.
Overall
, both of
Petroleum Change preposition
apply
products
and engineered goods achieved the biggest value
. Meanwhile, Agricultural products
and Textiles were the lowest in value
in
during the whole period.
In terms of Petroleum Change preposition
apply
products
, it accounted for a slight increase from 2015 to 2016, at 3% so it rose up
from 60 Change preposition
apply
billion
to 63 billion
in approximate
. Change the word
approximately
Similarly
, Engineered
goods exports figure went up by 8.5% from around 50% to just over 60 Correct article usage
the Engineered
billion
. In contrast
, Germs and jewellery revenues had a slight decrease at 5.18% whereas
it dropped from nearly 42 billion
to around 40 billion
.
For Agricultural products
, the values almost did not change as it
fell Correct pronoun usage
they
down
only by 0.81%. Change preposition
apply
However
, there was a significant increase in the Textiles category figure accounting for 15.24% where the value
climbed from around 25 billion
to over 30 billion
.Submitted by menamakram2005 on
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