The planet's population is reaching unsustainable levels, and people are facing shortage of resources like water, food and fuel. To what consequences may overpopulation lead? In your opinion, what measures can be taken to fight overpopulation?

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Nowadays, growing population is

important issue

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an important issue

, which need to be addressed, Globally.

This

may be because of religious customs in most of the countries.

Problem's

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The problem's

and some of the solutions can be discussed in the later part. Coming to Problem's, because of

over growth

excessive size; usually caused by excessive secretion of growth hormone from the pituitary gland

overgrowth

of human resources, we are majorly facing issues regarding food, pure water and fuel. Here are some of the

cause

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causes

. Cultivation became difficult due to global warming and deforestation. Increase in head count made to reduce forest area and burning of wood and natural resources

for

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from

global warming, for livelihood of people.

This

may have serious impact on daily consumption and may lead to starvation for many, which is for

few

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a few

the few

now. Lack of green, have

impact

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impacted

the

mansoon

(astrology) one of 12 equal areas into which the zodiac is divided

mansion

monsoon

, which in turn has

negative effect

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a negative effect

on drinking water too, because of less rainfall. Consumption of natural resources for daily need

make

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makes

them to edge of

exstinct

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extinction

extinct

. Not only the above mentioned issue, we are

also

facing problems regarding health, sanity facilities. To resolve

this

problem, we need to grow more trees wherever the space is available.

This

increase rainfall and reduces the temperatures, that are increasing across the world. Apart from that, we need to encourage youth towards farming, due to which we can reduce the problem of bread and butter for our daily needs. Maintain of

eco

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Eco

balance may

also

solve the problem of water consumption. The Government should create awareness in

general public

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the general public

regarding large families. In Conclusion,

righ

an abstract idea of that which is due to a person or governmental body by law or tradition or nature

right

now it's important to go green as much as we can, so that we save

earth

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the earth

and give

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healthy and beautiful one to our

generations.

Its

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It's

not only the responsibility of

people representatives

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the peoples' representatives

peoples' representatives

peoples representatives

, but

also

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everyone of us, to make to

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achieve

achievable

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Fully explain your ideas

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Students should pay the full cost their own study, because universities education benefits individuals rather than society. To what extent do you agree disagree?