Some people think that in order to solve traffic and transportation problems people should be encouraged to live in cities rather than in suburbs or in the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Traffic problems are increasing day by day. Many individuals believe that the solution of traffic and transportation glitches is to persuade villagers and suburbs people to reside in urban regions. In my opinion,

although

cities have most of the

facilities but

Accept comma addition

facilities, but

introducing villagers to

city

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the city

will make the problem more complex. It is irrefutable that residing in

city

regions will help an individual to reach on destinations within time frame.

City

routes are interlinked with each other and the frequency of buses

are

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also

high in numbers on highways as compare with villages,

therefore

living in urban regions can solve the issue of transportation for villagers.

For example

city

routes in Bangalore are connected with each

with in

internal to, not outside; located in the bounds of

within

short distance of 2 km, which helps the

traveler

a person who changes location

traveller

to bypass during his needs.

However

, the introduction of villagers to

city

Suggestion

the city

will make urban places overcrowded and more complex. The increase in population means introduction of more vehicles and

more number

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the number

number

a number

of commuters, which results in

upsurge

Suggestion

an upsurge

the upsurge

of problems related to living conditions in the society.

Hence

, the problems of traffic and transportation will increase only.

In addition

to that, other problems could

also

increase

such

as sanitation, hygiene and pollution. In overall, the quality of life may deteriorate.

For instance

mostly

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most

cities like Mumbai is already classified as

most polluted

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the most polluted city

city

in the world,

therefore

, with

addition

Suggestion

the addition

of suburb people will make the situation worsen In conclusion, the admission of country side people to

city

Suggestion

the city

will not bring any solution to traffic and commuter problems,

instead

it may multiple other problems and make it chaotic for everyone.

Hence

, I disagree with the opinion and believe that the authority should find some other alternative.

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public transportation
traffic congestion
private vehicles
urban areas
long commutes
population density
sustainable transportation
efficient transportation options
cycling lanes
pedestrian pathways
advanced transit systems
overcrowding
transportation infrastructure
urban development
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