What are some important qualities of a good supervisor (boss)? Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important.

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People spend
enormous amount
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an enormous amount
enormous amounts
of
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in their workplaces, and how much they are enjoying
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at
that
time
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is completely depends on the attribute and attitude of their
supervisor
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. According to my point of
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view, there
are two main characters of good
boss
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, which are
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experience
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experienced
and his
professionalism
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. I will explore these two factors in
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following essay.
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of all, the amount of
experience
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that our
boss
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has is very important, because we are more likely to learn from a
supervisor
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who is very experienced in their field. Young people who are just starting out in their careers absorb new information like sponges, but even older workers can learn from those who have been around for a long
time
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. My own
experience
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is a compelling example of
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. When I began teaching ten years ago, my
supervisor
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, Simon, had been working in education for more than ten years. I was just out of college and knew very little about creating effective lesson plans, engaging students or even how to complete my paperwork. Simon took the
time
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to show me what he had learned over
previous decade
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the previous decade
, and
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I was soon able to keep up with my
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.
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, when I moved to a new school earlier
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year, my
supervisor
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actually had less
experience
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teaching than I did.
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, when I struggled with certain aspects of my job, he had very little to suggest that I did not already know.
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, my professional development stagnated
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Secondly
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, I feel that the
professionalism
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is important for a
boss
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, as it is essential to the maintenance of a good office environment. My sister once told me that her
first
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job following her graduation was difficult because of how toxic the office was. Workers were prone to gossiping, shirking their duties and arriving late each day.
This
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was seen as acceptable because most of the supervisors in the firm behaved in the exact same way. My sister was miserable, though, because she prides herself on her diligence and her ability to complete her tasks with care and enthusiasm.
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situation is a stark contrast to my
experience
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with Simon, who I mentioned above. He arrived early to the office each day, and never engaged in idle gossip about his
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. The people he supervised tried to do the same things. In conclusion, I believe that
experience
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and
professionalism
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are the hallmarks of a good
supervisor
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.
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is because we can learn a lot from a knowledgeable
boss
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, and because employees will strive to emulate a
supervisor
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who acts with
professionalism
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and dignity.
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