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What are some important qualities of a good supervisor (boss)? Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important.

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owadays many
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Nowadays, many
Nowadays many
Owadays many
 people work under supervision of someone else in private or state organizations. There are many important qualities that are required to become good managers. Some of these important qualities of a
supervisor
 are his
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
 towards employees and
also
 the ability of taking care of and motivating staff. Supervisors are people like anyone of us and
that is
 why they have positive and negative parts in their characters. Supervisors are responsible for the well organized and productive work of their employees.
That is
 the reason that supervisors have to own some qualities, which make them good managers. One of the most important qualities of a good
supervisor
 is patience. A
supervisor
 has to be patient to his
/
her employees.
This
 quality is very essential for everyone who wants to be a good
supervisor
. Human being is not perfect and
therefore
 making mistakes is unavoidable. Because of
this
 reason, a
supervisor
 has to be patient in order to teach and train others about the important things about the specific of the job. Other important qualities of a good
supervisor
are
introduces an alternative
or
 his
/
her tolerance, kindness and respect. A good manager has to encourage
workers
Suggestion
the workers
. He
/
she has to motivate employees by bonuses and increasing salaries. A good
supervisor
 has to care about people, should believe them and pay attention to their feelings and know how to teach them. He has to be honest and willing to accept his own mistakes and tolerate with others' mistakes. A good manager not only has to be patient, but
also
 has to trust workers so that they can become productive. In conclusion, there are many qualities that a good
supervisor
 should possess.
However
, on top of all the qualities, a good manager has to care about people, who are working under his
/
her supervision and to know how to encourage and motivate them.
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