Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business. Why do you think that is? What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts?
Despite Art is internationally seen as a cultural asset, the number of people interested in working with it has
drecreased
while other fields made less in size or amount or degree
decreased
such
as science, Linking Words
bussiness
and technology have experienced an increase of workers. a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
This
essay is going to explain why Linking Words
this
is happening and what can be done to Linking Words
adress
the place where a person or organization can be found or communicated with
address
this
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innequality
.
When it comes lack of equality
inequality
to choose
a career, most of people pick the professions which vacancies are plenty and allow a decent income because they do not want to be unemployed and they need money to support themselves and their family in the future. Since Art is known for not offering many fairly paid Suggestion
to choosing
jobs
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job
apportunities
, people are a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
negleting
their creative skills and going for what is in demand in the market. leave undone or leave out
neglecting
As a result
, they can become frustrated with their lives and present poor performance at work. Linking Words
For example
, a recent research shows that 65% of IT students at Melbourne University who had scored the lowest grades in their assessments would be more Linking Words
satisfyed
if they were taking an Art course.
Governments, the filled with satisfaction
satisfied
responsables
for their citizens worthy of or requiring responsibility or trust; or held accountable
responsible
wellbeing
, should take action to tackle Suggestion
well being
this
serious issue which can lead to Linking Words
psycological
illnesses mental or emotional as opposed to physical in nature
psychological
such
as depression. To start with, more vacancies at public Art schools should be created so learning Art could be made available not only to wealthy people but to everyone. Linking Words
Furthermore
, Art galleries and Art festival could be subsidised. By doing Linking Words
this
, more permanent and casual jobs positions would be offered with Linking Words
minum
wages the least possible
minimum
stabilished
.
In conclusion, Some people have given up their artistic talent due to the lack of made stable or firm
stabilised
stabilized
oportunities
of making a a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
live
from Art which leads to frustration and Suggestion
living
unhappyness
. To solve emotions experienced when not in a state of well-being
unhappiness
this
problem, Politicians owe to invest in Art so as to encourage people to follow the career they want and find job satisfaction.
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