Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In recent times, there is high demand of common consumer goods despite the fact that it is of no use to those living in the environment where it is sold.
This
is
therefore
a true reflection of advertisement. In my opinion, I believe advertising has truly had great influence on the choices people make. With the advent of modern technology, disseminating
informationto
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information to
the public has become easier and stronger compared to the
pas
long bench with backs; used in church by the congregation
pews
pace
peas
,
thus
, making a lot of
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individuals have
myriads of
unnnecessary
not necessary
unnecessary
items in their possession.
For instance
, the social media platform was used by the apple company to advertise latest
iphones
electronic equipment that converts sound into electrical signals that can be transmitted over distances and then converts received signals back into sounds
phones
such
that there was a sudden crave for
this
hand-held
small and light enough to be operated while you hold it in your hands
handheld
device by the people, causing many individuals to acquire it despite the fact that they still had phones they were using before.
Furthermore
, another platform via which the people's minds have been captured is through advertisement displayed on billboards and
this
is no surprise because they are placed in very
promnent
having a quality that thrusts itself into attention
prominent
permanent
locations
such
that everyone passing by
is
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being
able to see it
.
Accept space
.
Commonly displayed information is usually about the new product in the market and they look so captivating that whoever sees
this
advert is compelled to purchase the item whether they need it or not.
For example
, there was a billboard advertisement
for
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of
a type of hair lotion few months ago near my residence which looked so enticing,
thus
, making several people to desire to have it even though they did not need it. In conclusion, advertising truly has great effect on the people's expenditure,
thus
compelling them to acquire items they do not utilize at all
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