People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?

In the recent times, the majority of the population
are living
Suggestion
is living
in urban areas. That would be
owin
owed as a debt
owing
to the reason that urban areas are more developed and
therefore
provide more and better opportunities. Though there are advantages of living in
thses
plural of "this"
these
this
those
places, they actually have to experience various difficulties, including tough living conditions and environmental
pollution
. There
are
Suggestion
is
a plethora of difficulties that people have to face living in huge cities, the major ones would be finding a place to live and environmental
pollution
. As there is an innumerable
individuals
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individual
dwelling in these cities, there are not enough flats and houses to
accomodate
be agreeable or acceptable to
accommodate
each and every one of them, especially at an affordable rate and
therefore
,
this
leads to a considerable number of people opting for living in cramped flats or on
streets
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the streets
.
This
would obviously affect their physical and mental well being, and
hence
their work and earnings. Apart from the above, everyone living in cities
have
Suggestion
has
to deal with environmental
pollution
. As
most
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Most
of the population
live
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lives
in metropolitan cities, due to public and private transportation, a lot of
perillious
fraught with danger
perilous
gases
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gas
are evolved,
in addition
, they have to experience traffic congestion,
hence
, leading to noise
pollution
too. To tackle both the issues above, governments should promote the moving from urban areas to rural ones. If
this
is followed by people,
then
it would mean that the population in the cities would decrease,
therefore
air
pollution
would be
aeviated
(of pain or sorrow) made easier to bear
alleviated
elevated
evaluated
and an increasing number of folks can
experiance
the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities
experience
better living conditions.
However
, by migrating to rural areas, they would loose the
oppurtunities
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
opportunity
to lead a better life as those areas are not developed,
therfore
(used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result
therefore
they
can not
can not
cannot
have access to to a good
infrastucture
the basic structure or features of a system or organization
infrastructure
and jobs.
This
is why
government
Suggestion
the government
should take measures and introduce development and better
infrastuctures
the basic structure or features of a system or organization
infrastructures
to propel and persuade people to move to rural areas. In conclusion, finding a comfortable place to live and air
pollution
are two of the major issues of urban life. To combat
this
problem,
government
Suggestion
the government
should step in and take certain measures,
such
as developing the small towns and encouraging people to migrate there.
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