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In some countries it is now illegal to reject someone applying for a job because of his or her age. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Restricting anyone because of the demographics from any opportunity does curtail individual’s freedom.
This
 essay agrees that it is a positive development to prohibit employers to reject a candidate based on his/her age because; it is immoral and has worrying consequences. Freedom is a vital pillar of modern
society
. The
society
 may fall under its own weight if we compromise with
this
 pillar. When we start compromise with something as important as
this
,
then
 we never know when to stop.
Therefore
,
end
Suggestion
the end
to
Suggestion
of
 the road for any
society
 is not pleasing which begins by curtailing the chances of employment because of age.
For example
, the
next
 practice may be to deny someone because of gender and
then
 religion.
This
 will shred the very fabric which is keeping the community together.
Therefore
,
new law
Suggestion
the new law
a new law
 is beneficial for the harmony of the nations who adopted it. Denying employment other than skills and productivity is detrimental on one’s confidence and their personal life. We live in a
society
 where it is essential to be employed to run a family. One may
looses
Suggestion
loose
 their moral and may get stressed because of trivial reason
such
 as age. No nation wants their elder citizens to be unproductive and stressed.
For example
, if a person who is in his early 50s and have kids in late 10s and wants to get employed and is
also
 sole bread earner of the family. The trivial leash on his chances can have humungous detrimental effects on
whole
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the whole
 of his family. To conclude, the countries that have prohibited denying jobs because of how old they are is fantastic because it helps to improve the harmony of the
society
 and let people live with less stress.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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