Pollution of air, water and soil has become critical in last years and it takes millions of years to recoup. What are the main causes of pollution? How can we tackle this problem individually and globally?

Nowadays, Pollution became
an
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a
serious and critical issue across the globe.
This
happens varies means, out of which some of them, will be discussed in the later part. Regarding the cause, mainly, we need to consider of Air, water and soil. Mainly, the industries and automobile's are the source for the
first
and
second
. As an example, the gasses that are emitted from vehicle and factory. They are not only polluted them but
also
create
adverse effect
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an adverse effect
adverse effects
on human
helath
a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease
health
. Coming
to
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in
third
,
this
was done through
extense
utilization of
fertilizer's
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the fertilizer's
and
polythen
a lightweight thermoplastic; used especially in packaging and insulation
polythene
polyethylene
bags. Because of former, erosion is
happened
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happening
and fertility was lost. And for the latter, they can't decomposed and both adds to the problem.
Soltion's
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Solutions
for the above are through
varies
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varied
varying
way's. For land, we need to educate
famer's
a person who operates a farm
farmers
, to go for organic farming.
Secondly
, we should create awareness in society, to avoid using non recycled bags. For the rest of two problems, we need to have extensive plantation, which reduces CO2 from atmosphere and provides
oxgyen
a nonmetallic bivalent element that is normally a colorless odorless tasteless nonflammable diatomic gas; constitutes 21 percent of the atmosphere by volume; the most abundant element in the earth's crust
oxygen
for us.
This
is
for
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to
cure and preventing method is to have
through
painstakingly careful and accurate
thorough
check on sources by Government official's. Those who
violet
fail to agree with; be in violation of; as of rules or patterns
violate
the rules need to
punished
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punish
appropiately
in an appropriate manner
appropriately
.
This
reduce
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reduces
the effect to
large
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larger
extend. In conclusion, Not the elected members, but
also
public should
be
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also be part
also
be part of
reponsibility
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the responsibility
responsibility
.
Then
only problems can be eliminated and people can live in
good and healthy environment
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a good and healthy environment
.
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