Mordern building change the character and appearance of towns and cities. The government should insist that new buildings be built in traditional styles to protect cultural identity. To what extent do u agree or disagree?

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Modern
day
buildings are known to change the appearance of towns and cities. It is some people's view that government ought to make it compulsory for houses to be built traditionally so as to promote culture. In my own opinion, I completely disagree with
this
view because it is individual preferences and choices that matter more and
also
the benefit of being able to incorporate latest technology into the building. On a
first
note, it is important for buildings to reflect the style and preference of the individual who will reside in the building. People who reside in a place are the greatest determinant of how it should be built, in my own view. Since,
government
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the government
will not live with anyone in their homes, the choice of appearance and style ought to be theirs.
For example
, my father has to build a new duplex that had a garden and a gymnasium, these were great relaxation tools for him, whenever he comes from work. While I agree that promotion of cultural heritage is
also
crucial, I,
however
, strongly think that
this
should not be placed above personal choices and preferences. Another reason why I disagree is that
mordern
belonging to the modern era; since the Middle Ages
modern
day
houses can benefit from
latest
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the latest
innovation. Many homes, nowadays, are enhanced technologically. It is not uncommon to see homes in the 21st century with
in-built
existing as an essential constituent or characteristic
inbuilt
solar panels, as an example, which helps to serve as a source of clean energy. Another example is that of buildings in many big cities in my country, Nigeria which have green roofs.
This
innovation helps to ensure that
such
homes have sufficient natural
oxygen which
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oxygen, which
is a by- product from the plants on the roof, which is the
taken
an individual instance of a type of symbol
token
through vents into the houses. While some may tend to argue for the protection of cultural heritage by advising government to promote traditional styles,
this
modern
day
advantage of technologically empowered houses overrides
this
argument. In conclusion, there is a need to promote modern
day
buildings over the olden
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day
ys type, in order to ensure that people live happily in their home
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Accept space
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,while
also
enjoying the additional benefits of technology in their homes
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