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Some argue that it is the responsibility of the parents to teach children about healthy eating habits, whereas others believe that teachers should be responsible for teaching their students how to eat in a healthy way. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Children are dependent on adults to learn and adopt a lifestyle involving healthy
food
beahvior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
. It is often argued that largely, the onus of inculcating a healthy eating habit lies with the parents.
However
,
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 side claims that
school
Suggestion
the school
 has obligation to train the kids.
This
 essay supports the view that primarily parents are responsible as they prepare
childern’s
 meals at home and children look
upto
Suggestion
up to
 their parents for adopting behaviour impacting their lifestyle. At home, parents are buying groceries, preparing
food
 at home for the whole family, and packing lunch for the kids.
This
 presents ample opportunities to involve and teach kids about the importance of consuming nutritious and wholesome meals. A recent study from FDA suggested that 67% of the kids responded that their eating habits have been shaped by their households and family meals. In
school
, teachers have the opportunity to instruct and demonstrate the importance of eating
food
that is
 good for health.
However
, it is not possible for a teacher to follow and pay detailed attention to every single child regarding what they are consuming while they are in
school
. Children only spend 33-35% of their daily time in
school
 and teachers have limited influence on parent’s decision making regarding their
food
 choices. A survey conducted in a county
school
 among teachers suggested that teachers had limited influence on the children’s diet. To conclude
this
, children’s palette is influenced and developed around their household
food
 choices which are essentially made by parents.
Therefore
, teachers or
school
play
Suggestion
plays
very small role
Suggestion
a very small role
 as compared to parents in shaping up their diet, making them responsible for eating habits.
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