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In today's world of advanced science and technology, we still greatly value our artists such as musicians, painters and writers. What can arts tell us about life that science and technology cannot?

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Artists play a major role in improving the values of ourselves. In
this
 modern
world
, There are few things which we can learn from arts rather than advanced science. In
this
 essay I will explain the
some
closely similar or comparable in kind or quality or quantity or degree
same
 values of
arts
Suggestion
the arts
. The creativity of the artists can never be matched by the advanced science and technology. In modern science,
Machines
Suggestion
the machines
the Machines
 are programmed to do specific set of actions which restricts them to have an ability to think and act. Artists elevates the value of one thing, be it a beautiful place or sad emotion.
For example
, author George R.R martin takes us into his own
world
 through his words.
However
, we could not recreate the same universe with the use of our advancement in the field of graphics.
by
Suggestion
Buy
By
 v Music directors are celebrated across the
world
. Different music
are enjoyed
Suggestion
is enjoyed
 by people all over the
world irrespective
Accept comma addition
world, irrespective
 of the language and cultural differences. Whereas technology could be used only for
faster reach
Accept comma addition
faster, reach
 of music to different places and could not be used to produce an original music which will be enjoyed all over the
world
. Computers can be used to draw different pictures either by programming or using manual tools, whereas a painter can recreate the place he imagines or visits. Though the latest technology may be used for popularising the work produced by the artists, it can never be able to produce
same work
Suggestion
the same work
 as artists.
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