The planet's population is reaching unsustainable levels, and people are facing shortage of resources like water, food and fuel. To what consequences may overpopulation lead? In your opinion, what measures can be taken to fight overpopulation?

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Nowadays, Population
increase
is the major issue in most of the countries. It not only creates scarcity in daily needs, but
also
effects in other ways. We shall look into those in the remaining part. Coming to consequences,
First
and foremost impact on health. Because of
over crowdy standard
Suggestion
the over Crowdy standard
over Crowdy standard
over crowded standard
of living decreases and in turn reflect's on poverty growth.
For
example
, due to
increase
family member's and not with income,
then
healthy food
can't to be provided
Suggestion
can't be provided
to all.
This
may lead to issues caused by lack of nutrition.
Secondly
, scarcity of essential good's like food, water and fuel. Growth of humans can't
accomdiate
be agreeable or acceptable to
accommodate
with
proper meal
Suggestion
a proper meal
, drinking and transportation facilities.
For
example
, if Density of people increases, either we can't
increase
the cultivation land nor the natural resources. Because of
these
denotes a person or thing
this
, people may end up with losing their lives with starvation.
Lets
Suggestion
Let's
look at the measures for the above.
Firstly
, we need to educate the public, regarding the problems of bigger families and encourage them to have one or two children.
Secondly
,
increase
Suggestion
Increase
income of a person by providing more job facilities.
For
example
, if Factories are constructed,
then
employment will be more and will have
rise
Suggestion
risen
in the salary.
Third
, we should motivate farmers in order to cultivate in
organic way
Suggestion
an organic way
.
For
example
, if fertilizers are used in farming
then
issue of soil erosion arises and
can not
can not
cannot
be used for
longer run
Suggestion
longer runs
a longer run
. In conclusion, Each and every individual is responsible to work towards the problem, so that the problem can be resolved in
shorter span
Suggestion
a shorter span
. Apart from public,
Government
Suggestion
the Government
should provide tax benefits
to
Suggestion
for
the smaller families, so that it motivates and solve the
cause
an occurrence of something
case
.
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