These days, many children spend a lot of their time playing computer games but little time doing sports. Why is this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In many countries today, there have been an increase in the
time
children spend playing video
games with a reduction in physical activities. This
trend is due to inadequate parental guidance and it has deleterious health complications.
A major reason why children spend more time
on computer games is because of poor parental guidance. Many parents now have busy work schedule
which has limited the Suggestion
a busy work schedule
busy work schedules
time
needed to supervise their children. Thus
, they neither educate their children on the benefits of sports nor set limit
on the use of mobile devices and computers. Suggestion
limits
As a result
, young ones are introduced by their peers to combative games
Accept comma addition
games, for
for instance
, Call of Duty which is designed by its programmers to be addictive. This
has resulted in more time
spent on video
games.
A significant development when children spend more time
on video
games rather than physical activities is health complications. These problems result from sedentary lifestyle
associated with passive recreational activities. Suggestion
from a sedentary lifestyle
For example
, in many industrialized countries, there have been a rise in childhood obesity and cardivascular
diseases due to the inactive activities of young one. More so, animated games played on of or pertaining to or involving the heart and blood vessels
cardiovascular
mobile phone
may expose child to accidents as their awareness and response to the Suggestion
a mobile phone
mobile phones
envronment
is reduced. the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
This
would be avoided if children participated more in sports.
In conclusion, the inadequate parent-to-child supervision makes children spend less time
on physical activities and more time
on video
games, resulting in health problems. Efforts gear
towards improving parental guidance should be encouraged. Suggestion
are geared
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