The planets population is reaching unsustainable levels and people are facing shortage of resources like water, food and fuel. To what consequences may over population lead? In your opinion what measures can be taken to fight over population

Overpopulation is a plague
that is
affecting most
under developed
relating to societies in which capital needed to industrialize is in short supply
underdeveloped
and developing countries.
Asides
Suggestion
The asides
, the glaring issue is that people are facing shortage of resources. A major consequence of
over population
too much population
overpopulation
is the rise in unemployment.
This
and measure to fight overpopulation will be fully analysed in
this
essay. Overpopulation can lead to increase in the rate of unemployment. If a place is highly populated and the jobs available is lesser than the people,
this
will result into unemployment as the capacity of the companies cannot contain the populace. The Job available at any point in time should be almost equivalent to the people available to take over the employment. If the reverse is the case,
this
will
definently
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
lead to unhealthy competition and increased
unemeployment
the state of being unemployed or not having a job
unemployment
rate.
For instance
, in an overpopulated community of 10,000 people that have only  5,000 jobs  available, the companies in
such
place will only be able to employ the maximum of  5000  people. In effect,
this
implies that the remaining population will be unemployed. To fight
this
epidemeic
a widespread outbreak of an infectious disease; many people are infected at the same time
epidemic
, it is advised that family planning, safe sex and use of contraceptives be widely publicised by the government, hospitals and other stakeholders. With family planning, the rate of birth will be reduced as
this
will serve  as a form of control to child birth. Sensitization programs should be organized in both rural and local communities.
For example
, intending couples should be given family planning books and videos so they can opt for the best method.
In addition
, safe sex and abstinence should be preached in order to avoid
over crowding
cause to crowd together too much
overcrowding
. To conclude, the world is facing shortage of resources
as a result
of too many
population
Suggestion
populations
, measures need to be taken to tackle
this
at the grassroots, more focus need to be placed on awareness programs as if
this
is not curtailed soonest, it might get to a point where people will kill each other as a form of survival instinct.
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