You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

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Dear John, I am the new tenant at your downtown apartment. I moved on the 21st of

this

month.

Firstly

, I want to thank you for renting

this

apartment to us. Everything in the house is in good condition except the recliner sofa in

living

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room. Looks like recline seat button for one of the sofa seat is not working.

Intially

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Initially

I thought

its

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it's

it is

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just me who doesn't know how

this

works but both my brother and dad

also

couldn't figure it out. We watched few youtube videos to understand and

also

went through the manual you gave us on the day we moved in but we had no luck with it. It looks like something

wrong

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with the button but we didn't try much to fix it. I am not sure if you have experienced

this

problem before or any of the

ealier

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earlier

tenants reported that but looks like we may have to ask

furniture

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shop to send someone to fix it. My parents will be at home throughout the day on weekdays and weekends so you can send someone to fix it anytime during the day. Thanks a lot for helping us and sorry for the trouble. Yours, N

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The Closing

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Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

201 words

5.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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