Rich countries should allow jobs for skilled and knowledgeable employees who are from poor countries. Do you agree or disagree?

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many debats nowadays that rich and development countries should allow jobs skilled knowledgeable and talented employees from underdevelopment countires.

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, now working and getting

work permit

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in the rish and big countries considered a very difficult issues regarding many segmants. In my

openion

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, I agree totally that rish countries should provide more jobs opportunities for indiviuals abroad, The diversity and new sights

this

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idea will bring to these countries will help development and production.

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, by

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the relashion ships between those countries increase the loyality

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in war periods with another nations.

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, talented who work in

rch

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countries can support their families at home financially to improve the standard of living style in health, education and more aspects. In general,

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will lead

evenutally

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to improving the econominc as well in the poor couintries. In conclusion, I strongly agree with the idea

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giving more chances for more superior and talented employees and indviduals.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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There is many debats nowadays that rich and development countries should allow jobs skilled knowledgeable and talented employees from underdevelopment countires. However, now working and getting work permit in the rish and big countries considered a very difficult issues regarding many segmants.In my openion, I agree totally that rish countries should provide more jobs opportunities for indiviuals abroad, The diversity and new sights this idea will bring to these countries will help development and production.Also, by mantianing the relashion ships between those countries increase the loyality for instance in war periods with another nations.On the other hand, talented who work in rch countries can support their families at home financially to improve the standard of living style in health, education and more aspects. In general, this will lead evenutally to improving the econominc as well in the poor couintries.In conclusion, I strongly agree with the idea in giving more chances for more superior and talented employees and indviduals. paragraphs

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