Some people say that health care and education should be the responsibility of the government but others think that it is the responsibility of the individuals themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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To create a progressive society
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a need arises to
uplift it's
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uplift, it's
health
and educational standards.A question is
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rising
risen
with it is that who is answerable for
this
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, whether
government
or citizens themselves.In my opinion
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I trust that both
government
and
papulace
people in general considered as a whole
populace
are responsible for
this
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essay will highlight both options and
also
elaborate that individuals '
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the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
obligation
in maintaining healthy and
educative
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educational
excellence
overnorished
the role of
government
. Keeping in view the responsibility of official administration it is deemed that they should ensure the
acedemic
associated with academia or an academy
academic
academics
academies
and educational institutions should be maintained properly as only these can present best comfort and resources to individuals.
In other words
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as it is a known fact that everyone in a country pay taxes so
automatically it becomes
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it automatically becomes
the duty of the rulers of the concerned nations to provide best
health
clubs
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good sports facilities, medical provisions and other kinds of relevant information about
health
as well as better approach of primary and secondary
education
free of cost
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especially for those strata of the society which are unable to pay for it.
For instance
, in Delhi in India
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its
government
bears the entire burden not only of its habitants'
health but
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health, but
also
it
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works a
lot to raise the
level
of
education
of people from all walks of life
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as dictated in a report by
ABP newspaper
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the ABP newspaper
ABP newspapers
in India.
Therefore
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a sound body and mind and well literate generation can be managed only by the higher authority of a nation for greater developments.
However
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the adage "
first
desires
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desires, then
then
deserve" is applied in the
contaxt
discourse that surrounds a language unit and helps to determine its interpretation
context
contexts
contest
that individuals
also
at personal
level
play a pivotal role to bring big changes in their own
health
and
education
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a person is liable for their
haleness
the quality of being holy
holiness
wholeness
and pedagogical accomplishment
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If people will not desire to have sound bodies and never try to utilize the
health
related facilities
then
how can a society get it's dwellers in a healthy condition.
Moreover
, being healthy and educated can contribute a lot in a person 's well being
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To
examplify
be characteristic of
exemplify
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in a country where people are provided with robust
health
and educational amenities
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were found suffering from many stomach diseases just for their negligence to follow basic
health
tips and were found having less interest in study in spite of enjoying greater support from
government
for
this
.So
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it is a general overview that only a person can take care of themselves properly.
Finally
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in my opinion, to gain
higher
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a higher level
higher levels
level
of
health
and sports club in countries and better expensive equipments both for play and studies
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,
government
plays a fundamental role
for
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in
this
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in contrast
as far as people's day to day
health
issues and
education
needs are concerned only individual attention can improve the standards of living. To culminate
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getting a good
health
and
education
people have to do more efforts at personal
level
that will work in the long run.
Government
can
also
help them by providing excellent facilities to follow
this
lifestyle in a practical way.
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