In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree?

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nowadays,
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the Smoking is an serious issue. Most of the countries made it legal, to smoke
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public places. Will discuss the pros and cons in the later part.
First
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, Let's discuss the topic, smoking outside the building. Most of the Nations, allow smokers to do it on
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but not in closed area.
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side
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is, making them to reduce.
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, if zones are not available for them, in shopping malls,
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they have to move out of the
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area to do it.
some
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people,
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of going they tend to stop smoking, atleast for sometime. Negative
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, doing it
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public place like road or parking, may make others to get to it, by seeing these people. Another positive
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is, people tend to reduce smoking, by not having the time to go our.
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, At working hours, people usually use to be busy. So they don't find time to go out for it.
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cause them to reduce the
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to an large extend. Other
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is, when they go out, they tend to smoke more cigarrets, than the usual.
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may cause to consume more, that too for only
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In conclusion, considering the above points, I agre
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o the point, that people going out for puffing. As most of them avoid their habit.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • secondhand smoke
  • respiratory problems
  • cardiovascular disease
  • clean air
  • public health
  • hospital admissions
  • economic benefits
  • smoking cessation
  • cultural shift
  • healthcare costs
  • smoke-free laws
  • enforcement
  • designated smoking areas
  • compliance
  • social attitudes
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