A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

These days, people have been categorised according to what external elements they have, like belongings and social status.
However
, internal characters are not essential anymore.
This
essay totally disagrees with
this
statement because humans care about their
benifits
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
, it is difficult to find
trustworthy society
Suggestion
a trustworthy society
in
this
world.
Humans’ thinking process
Suggestion
The humans’ thinking process
A humans’ thinking process
has been changed over a period of time in
this
modern world, to become more selfish than anything else. People live in a hectic lifestyle and in a specific routine
as a result
of
this
, they do not have enough time to change most of the world problem, and within a specific of time they got used to it and accept the idea of forgetting the internal personality.
For instance
,
Al Khaleej Times newspaper
Suggestion
the Al Khaleej Times newspaper
have recently asked
Suggestion
has recently asked
the population about
this
statement and more than 60% say yes.
However
, human beings must consider the internal values
instead
of external one’s because one day all of
this
material will go away while the old values remained constant without any changes. We should protect these values by transfer them to the
next
generation and prepare them about what they will face in the future. We
can not
can not
cannot
live
in
Suggestion
on
this
planet without trust with each other. Let us take the latest researches as an example, most of Arabic cultures reflect these concepts as on the basics stones when they raise up their kids. In conclusion, we should monitor our
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviours
to enhance our relationships and make it stronger by
improve
Suggestion
improving
the concepts of personalities and internal feelings. I would have to say that Old-fashioned values are always superior.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Social status
  • Material possessions
  • Old-fashioned values
  • Honour
  • Kindness
  • Trust
  • Judged
  • Importance
  • Traditional
  • Reflection
  • Achievements
  • Hard work
  • Disregarded
  • Well-balanced
  • Meaningful
  • Cultural norms
  • Societal norms
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