In recent years, there has been a rise in the popularity of second hand clothing amongst younger generations. Why is this happening? Do you think it is a positive development or negative development?

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Clothing is everyone’s basic necessity. Fashionable and latest

trend

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trendy

clothes are

primary choice

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the primary choice

for

everybody specially

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everybody, especially

everybody especially

the young generation. There are evidences which

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show

that there has been a sudden increase in

demand

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of used clothes in

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last few years

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the last few years

specifically in

youth

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. The reasons behind that might be the increasing costs of clothing or the decreasing

power

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of spending in

youth

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essay

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about the reasons and whether it’s a positive or negative

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. Many factors which

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contribute

towards the reasons for

increase

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the increase

demand

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second

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hand

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clothing. The cost of fashionable attire is increasing which makes it less affordable to young people.

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, now-a-days youngsters are struggling to get into the

employment

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of their choice and higher studies are becoming more costly. Which in turn, decreases their spending

power

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. And sometimes due to under

employment

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many

youth

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have

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has

to compromise with emoluments. Ultimately, they have to narrow down their desires of being extravagant. In

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situation they prefer to switch on

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hand

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clothing, which has its own impact on the

development

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. On one side, decreased

demand

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of new clothes makes it tough for cloth manufacturing units. Apparel making companies have to bear

cost

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the cost

of decreased

demand

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and price increases

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But on

other

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the other hand

hand

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, it’s showing that

youth

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are becoming

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is becoming

less extravagant due to

less

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fewer employment

employment

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opportunities or compromise with

current job’s pay package

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the current job’s pay package

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shows clearly a decrease in

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the economic power

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coming generation

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the coming generation

coming generations

and makes us more worried about

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negative

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. In conclusion, as the

second

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hand

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clothes are becoming more famous in

youth

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last few years which

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the last few years, which

the last few years which

shows a decline is purchasing

power

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youth

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Reasons

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The reasons

might be under

employment

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or quality jobs are becoming more inaccessible to young people these days. In my view point

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It's

intricate a negative

development

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and proper measures to be taken to improve the situation.

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In recent years, there has been a rise in the popularity of second hand clothing amongst younger generations. Why is this happening? Do you think it is a positive development or negative development?

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