Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
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performances hardly get funds for the survival. Though a lack Suggestion
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money for the theatre exists, Suggestion
of
lion's portion
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the arts
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opinion cannot be accepted as Linking Words
art
is indeed a becomes a service through Use synonyms
the happy
moments it can give to people.
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the happiest
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easthetics
could heal their (art) the branch of philosophy dealing with beauty and taste (emphasizing the evaluative criteria that are applied to art)
aesthetics
mind
. Suggestion
minds
Therefore
, it can give no waste of money for the government by spending on Linking Words
theater
and drama. In fact, reducing stress could lead to a a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
theatre
dipression
-free future elderly generation. a mental state characterized by a pessimistic sense of inadequacy and a despondent lack of activity
depression
It
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thus
, inevitably becomes a public service.
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on
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in
did
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did art subjects end
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job-less
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Lanka, where
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finances
financial
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monetory
backups for building relating to or involving money
monetary
theaters
, facilitating musicians, and even encouraging society to grab those entertainments would be some of a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
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features
measures
the government could take.
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the measures
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lifesyles
reducing hospital bills. Improving a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyles
easthetic
work could generate relating to or dealing with the subject of aesthetics
aesthetic
emplyments
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employment
also
. Linking Words
Therefore
, it can be agreed that governments should spend on Linking Words
art
as well as other public services since those Use synonyms
expenditure
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expenditures
also
fall into public services account. Linking Words
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