Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?

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Nowadays, Few animals are at the edge of extinction, because of human actions. There may be lots many of
reasons
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the reasons
and important of them are discussed below. Cause for loss of bio-diversity are mainly because of industries, over population.
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, Industrial revolution, As
this
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was
progressed
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progressing
, country economy started growing and at the same time pollution
also
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increased, which
effects
have an effect upon
affects
many living
organism
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organisms
.
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, The gas that was released
in to
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
the air from them, is more dangerous to flying animals.
Secondly
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, Due to increase in people count.
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of
this
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, most of the area got deforestation for living and cultivation.
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, to provide food to rise, most of the forest area got converted to farming. Regarding the solutions for the above, Factory should be monitored regularly. Continuous monitoring should be done on the waste release from them.
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, if more chemical's are released,
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they should be closed else if above the limit,
then
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should be warned.
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, the Government should take necessary action on the population growth.
Public
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The public
should be educated regarding the consequences.
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, small advertisement should be telecasted or published in all channel's of media, in order to create awareness in the people. In conclusion,
Its
it is
it's
It's
not only responsible
of
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for
the ruling party, but
also
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everyone of us to work for the solution for the problem. At the end, we have to provide better and healthy society to our
next
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generation's.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • habitat destruction
  • deforestation
  • urbanization
  • overexploitation
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • invasive species
  • conservation
  • sustainable practices
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • ecosystems
  • species population
  • genetic diversity
  • environmental awareness
  • protected areas
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