The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The
number
of personnel and manufactories in England and Wales from1851 to
1901 Change preposition
from
illustrated
by the given statistics.
Add a missing verb
is illustrated
Overall
, the steadily decreasing was the tendency of the figures of both masculine and feminine laborers
in two different nations and so was the summed up Change the spelling
labourers
number
, while
the number
of factories showed the contrary trend.
During three decades, starting in 1851, the number
of entire employees in both countries displayed a considerable decline from 477100 and remained 140123
in 1871. The reason why the total Change preposition
at 140123
number
dropped significantly is that the statistics of
male and female workforces Change preposition
for
also
decreased in the very first 30 years. The falling sign had
endured for the following three decades. In 1881, there were approximately 126000 people Unnecessary verb
apply
worked
as employees, comprising Wrong verb form
working
of
76132 masculine workers and 50000 feminine personnel. After an enormous decline over 50 years, the figures eventually remained Change preposition
apply
61000
employees in the primary year of the 1900s.
Change preposition
at 61000
On the other hand
, the number
of factories remained stable for the first 20 years. Thenceforward, it suddenly climbed up to 622 factories in 1871. After reaching a peak at 721 sweatshops in 1881, it decreased remarkably and subsequently
ended up with the number
of 600.Submitted by nguyenkhaiminh2121 on
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