The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The
number
of personnel and manufactories in England and Wales from1851
to
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1901
illustrated
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by the given statistics.
Overall
, the steadily decreasing was the tendency of the figures of both masculine and feminine
laborers
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in two different nations and so was the summed up
number
,
while
the
number
of factories showed the contrary trend. During three decades, starting in 1851, the
number
of entire employees in both countries displayed a considerable decline from 477100 and remained
140123
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in 1871. The reason why the total
number
dropped significantly is that the statistics
of
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male and female workforces
also
decreased in the very first 30 years. The falling sign
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endured for the following three decades. In 1881, there were approximately 126000 people
worked
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as employees, comprising
of
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76132 masculine workers and 50000 feminine personnel. After an enormous decline over 50 years, the figures eventually remained
61000
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at 61000
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employees in the primary year of the 1900s.
On the other hand
, the
number
of factories remained stable for the first 20 years. Thenceforward, it suddenly climbed up to 622 factories in 1871. After reaching a peak at 721 sweatshops in 1881, it decreased remarkably and
subsequently
ended up with the
number
of 600.
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