Many families move to different countries. Some people think children can benefit from this, while other consider it is hard for children if families move to a foreign country. Discuss both views and you opinion.

In recent

years it

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years, it

have become

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has become

had become

common for many families

to move

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moving

abroad for a period of time. The difficulties associated with living in a different

place

might be

overwelming

so strong as to be irresistible

overwhelming

, especially for children, and these may have dramatic effects on the

childs

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child's

development. While some believe that moving away might benefit the

child

, others think it might be

harmfull

causing or capable of causing harm

harmful

and should be avoided. Facing a new and different

envoironment

the totality of surrounding conditions

environment

environments

is not an easy task for children.

This

fact has been shown in a recent publication from Harvard

University which

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University, which

reported higher rates of depression and social isolation among foreign children. Several factors may

acount

a record or narrative description of past events

account

for the reported findings.

First

, moving away from our loved ones back home lead to

increased feeling

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increased feelings

an increased feeling

the increased feeling

of loneliness.

Second

, language difficulties can cause

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a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved

problems

with expression of feelings

such

as

saddness

emotions experienced when not in a state of well-being

sadness

or anger,

further

isolating the

child

.

Last

, cultural differences can lead to misinterpretation of gestures and,

as a result

increased frustrations. Despite the above

mentioned I

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mentioned, I

and many others believe that moving to a new country may be an amazing and

enreaching

make better or improve in quality

enriching

experience for our family. Teaching our

child

a new language,

such

as

spanish

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Spanish, for

Spanish for

spans for

for example

, may help him later in life when

traveling

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

abroad. Facing a new

place

and

learing

gain knowledge or skills

learn

learning

about its historical background and cultural ways will broaden

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his

knowledge and intellect.

Lastly

, the

challanges

take exception to

challenges

associating with starting over in a new

place

will teach the

child

how to cope

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with

stressful situations, a valuable

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a unit of instruction

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lessons

in life. In conclusion, despite the difficulties I believe that moving to a new

place

with our children and

familiy

a social unit living together

family

is an

imprortant

of great significance or value

important

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and should be done when possible.