The graph below shows an average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart depicts information about the carbon dioxide
emissions
per human being in four countries being
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those
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the
Sweden
, Italy and Portugal. The graph collects information in
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from
50 year
period from 1967 to 2007.
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, there has been a decreased
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emissions
of carbon according to
the information reported. For instance
, United
Kingdom demonstrates a consistent drop and Correct article usage
the United
Sweden
, with a small fluctuation, decreases its emissions
too. Whereas
Italy and Portugal, they
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apply
increase
their pollution throughout the 50 years recorded.
Even though each year represents a different amount of gas emitted, there are some countries that had a small variation from the beginning to the end results. Wrong verb form
increased
For example
, Portugal started off with the minimum amount of toxic gas disposal in 1967 of about 1 metric ton, however
it rocketed to over 5 in 2007. Even though it had a gradual Add a comma
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increased
, it was from the start to the end the country with the lowest gas emission of all. The same happened to Replace the word
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United
Kingdom, its Correct article usage
the United
emissions
fell, but it was constantly the country with the highest emissions
of all.
On the contrary
, the results slightly changed for Sweden
and Italy. For instance
, Italy, with a small fluctuation, climbed from being the
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obtaining
the
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place in countries with the highest emanations of CO2. As in Sweden
, it when from almost 9 metric tonnes to over 5 releases per person.Submitted by cristinaleonactive on
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