Some people say it is manufactures and supermarkets responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of products they sell and others say it is the consumers responsibility to avoid buying products with too much packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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There is an animated discussion amongst people about the issue whether manufacturers or buyers should be responsible regarding reduction in

usage

of excessively packaged products. Some people believe that manufacturers and supermarkets should take

responsibility whereas

Accept comma addition

responsibility, whereas

other

plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned

others

have a contrast opinion. I agree with the former opinion and believe that retailers should be responsible for their product?

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packing as they have more options to reduce it, compared to

general population

Suggestion

the general population

. On one hand, some people state that change can happen from a single motivated person which in turn can attract billions of people to follow him.

Thus

, the believers argue that buyers should stop buying heavily packaged products.

For instance

, a senior citizen in

bangalore

an industrial city in south central India (west of Chennai)

Bangalore

city in India took an initiative to stop

usage

of plastic based products by educating his family members

first

, followed by his friends and neighbours.

However

, by

this

method of approach he can hardly educate hundreds of people which

Suggestion

are

very minimal change.

On the other hand

, some people and I have contradictory opinion and believe that a huge change can be seen if retailers could stop producing packages with non-biodegradable plastics for their products.

For example

, a small company named bio in India decided to replace dangerous plastic with

environment

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environmentally

friendly plastics that are

bio degradable

capable of being decomposed by e.g. bacteria

biodegradable

, which is comparatively cheaper. So,

this

initiation from that company motivated many other retailers. Due to

this

step from retailers and supermarkets, 50% of the plastics

usage

has been reduced in the past 1 year. To conclude, by assessing the results from both

groups

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group's

groups'

perspective, even though it is necessary for both manufacturers and buyer to avoid plastic packaged product

usage

, maximum results are achieved when retailers became responsible and reduced

packaged

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packaging

products production.

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

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Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Clear and correct grammar

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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Some people say it is manufactures and supermarkets responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of products they sell and others say it is the consumers responsibility to avoid buying products with too much packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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