Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and, experience and support your answer with examples and relevant evidence.

Parents

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The parents

of

this

generation pay more attention to a mother than a father, not just during the birth, but at the time of bringing up the child as well. While there has to be equal authority for both to take

decission

the act of making up your mind about something

decisions

decision

related to their

next

generation. I completely agree with distributing rights amongst both the parents.

Firstly

, raising an infant in the 20th century

is

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was

a

stubtle

difficult to detect or grasp by the mind or analyze

subtle

art and there is no defined set of rules which is to be followed in order to raise a child appropriately.

Moreover

,

father

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the father

a father

being the head of the family has a strict appeal to discipline their baby.

On the other hand

, mother would have to show concern and be helpful to them.

This

is not a hard fast rule, but what we observe in houses generally. The above mentioned criterion points out to allocating half priority to each of the parent.

Thus even

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Thus, even

fathers have to allocate

ample amout

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an ample amount

ample amount

of time to their children. Companies would have to follow policies in order to

provision

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provide

such

situations. Bringing up a child as a matter of fact is tedious. So, children might

also

have to obey their elders. To conclude, discipline is a quality to be learnt by observing and not by imposing. Children of

this

generation

shoudl

expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something

should

be compliant with their

parents be

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parents, be

it, a mother or a father,