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Some people prefer to work on school projects with a group, while others would rather work alone. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, it is very common for schools to assign group works for their students. While some believe that combining different qualities
in addition
 to dividing the work among different people is beneficial for a better
grades
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grade
, whilst others think that not only time consuming but
also
 it is an ineffective mean of learning. From my personal views, I see that working with groups is an essential task for children to know the sharing quality. It is undeniable that school projects need hard work and persistence specially if a student is aiming for an advanced score. It is a common fact that people have different qualities and strength points that can be helpful for maintaining a high level of projects if they are used in a
well
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good
 manner.
In other words
, while working in a group, people should state and acknowledge in the
first
 meeting what each individual does best and join them
for
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in
 an effective way for planning and studying.
For instance
, if a person happened to be a computer expert, he should surely handle all graphs and tables required in a report.
However
, some students prefer working on a project individually where they feel it is more convenient for them in various ways. To state their opinion
otherwise
, there are people who do not like to be restricted to a specific time
by
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of
 scheduling meeting with different people where they chose to work independently. Another reason they believe that working alone is more suitable is that they will have a chance to upgrade their potentials by training on different tasks
such
 as researching, formatting a
report
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reporting
 and writing. In conclusion, even though in my
opinion I
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opinion, I
 believe that working in
groups teaches
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groups, teaches
 a person how to share and communicate more, others disagree with me and think that working alone is more effective and suitable.
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