The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In present time different modes of
transport
should be used
instead
of private
ownership
.
Introducting
Suggestion
Introducing
international laws to regulate the
ownership
of cars is a method which should be applied.In my
opinion both
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opinion, both
of these
suggestion
Suggestion
suggestions
should be helpful for controlling the outburst of privately owned vehicles. Different modes of
transport
include
public
Suggestion
publicly
owned
transport
, which are generally bus
,
Accept space
,
trains
,
Accept space
,
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
.Public
transport
modes are relatively cheaper option to
private
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privately
owned
transport
such
as cars.For long distance
travel cars
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travel, cars
do take the same time as a bus
,
Accept space
,
but the driver keeps changing which in turns lets you to be relaxed.
Also
taking in perspective of
enivornment use
Suggestion
the environment use
environment use
of public
transport
is a safer option as private owned vehicles emit more
pollution
in terms of usage per
person
.As
pollution
emitted by a public
transport
vehicle would be more
comparing
Suggestion
comparable
compared
to a
car
, but
pollution
would be more for
car
in terms of per
person
it carries. Due to
such
outburst of cars many countries have adopted strict rules for production of cars to meet the emission standards. Due to
such
reasons some
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reasons, some
cars cannot be registered.These rules are adopted for both air as well as noise
pollution
.Some cars which are produced by Nissan do not meet requirement for
U
The objective case of we, the persons speaking
us
you
.S emission standards
such
as 'Nissan R32 Skyline'.These regulation
helps
Suggestion
help
in keeping in low emission of
pollution
.
Aslo
the capital and largest city of Norway; the country's main port; located at the head of a fjord on Norway's southern coast
Oslo
also
international laws regarding
ownership
should be put in motion.Laws limiting
ownership
of
car
per
person
should be applied in a country
were
In or at or to what place
where
the
ownership
of cars is too high. So population should be persuaded to use for public
transport
for their daily commute.
Also if
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Also, if
public
transport
isn't available for
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
,
Accept space
,
carpool is
also
an option to be considered.International laws for
car
ownership
should be introduced to restrict
exccesive
not divided or shared with others
exclusive
ownership
of
car
per
person
.
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